Without a shadow of a doubt, tourism plays a pivotal role in the economic thriving of countries, and governments are trying to employ strategies that increase income from this way. An unanswered question in this area is what is best promoting tourism policy. Despite some arguments asserting that governments should concentrate on enhancing the visual appeal of cities, I believe otherwise, maintaining that the top passengers’ priority is the security of the countries they will travel to. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
The first exquisite point corroborating my stance on this subject is that security boosts the tourism industry’s revenue. In other words, when visitors feel secure and tranquil during an abroad trip, they will encourage other people to travel there, so the total of tourists is increased. Furthermore, travelers may allocate more money and time for their vacations in these places. Consequently, the accommodation facilities, restaurants, and recreational centers enjoy more customers and demands. On the other hand, if a country is recognized as unsafe, it will seldom be chosen as a holiday destination. For example, Afghanistan is endowed with spectacular landscapes and wonderful historical monuments and is located near my hometown, Mashhad; however, neither my friends nor my relatives have gone there.
Another reason to be mentioned is that enhancing safety seeds the plant of cultural exchange. Given the presence of police everywhere, citizens and foreigners are less likely to commit crimes and illegal activities. Accordingly, without any concern, both communicate, interact, and learn about each other’s costumes, traditions, and religions. Also, they might revisit each other, or local people company their friends to see unknown amazing places. As a result, an excellent opportunity is provided to equip each other with a wealth of knowledge and unforgettable experiences. A survey conducted in my country has revealed that since the government has guaranteed the city’s security, the relationship between the host community and tourists improved.
Reflecting upon all ground mentioned above, one soon realizes that the provision of safety has priority over maintenance of old areas to benefit more from the tourism industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62889518414 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04371655223 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651558073654 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1702992865 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.882352941 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919271848062 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269279118023 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343696990384 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592360963008 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295641164709 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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