In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Nowadays, awareness is a more important part of human society and brings plenty of advantages to them. People try to use numerous resources to freshen up their knowledge. In some areas, they get masters and experts. Personally speaking, I agree with this statement that to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources for several reasons. In the following, I will pinpoint some outstanding reasons which support my idea.
The first thing that comes to mind the first time that we hear the Awareness is News. We Listen to News shows and read articles more than every time in our lives. We spend all time of our time in the day pursuing the trends and tendencies of subjects that occur around us like the last news of gold and stock price trends in the market. Some of this news is more important for us and play a critical role in our lives. we should aware of themes from reliable sources. Sometimes government men and Owings channels try to censor news of their audinece for thier attributes. In this situation, we have to get our important information from other sources like joinig on the other newspaper which has a different and opposite view against the subjects.
The second reason that I believe is more important is to get the information from different sources helps us to get this chance to familar with other people opition about subjects. When we hear others' respect and debates on the certain subjects we can make a clear and useful decision. For example, in politics and voting, when candidates start to the debate we can aware of their views and it helps us to make a good choice between them.
To the short long story, I think it is critical for us to be well-informed, by getting information from many different news resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7459807074 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6058112701 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4363572286 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323022972541 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105012786396 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158649157353 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249926475342 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135131026052 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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