In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
In the modern era, health has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, researchers have always searched ways for enhancing human's healthy. A controversial question which is often raised this idea is whether people prefer to do sport merely like walking in the parks or they prefer to do a group sport such as a volleyball for improving their health condition. I contend that doing a group sport can bring about several advantageous to people. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first factor to be mentioned is that doing a group sport has forced people for going to a gym regularly. To elaborate on my point, when people do a group sport such as football or volleyball, each member of the team has a special post or duty. In this situation, without each team member, the team would not be able to practice effectively. Therefore, team members have forced to go to the gym and participating in team practice. In other word, people cannot make some neglect for doing exercise such as becoming sleeping, having sluggishness. Also, sportsmen pay a lot of money for a gym; hence, they do not want to waste their money. This situation is like a force to them for going to the gym. In contrast, when ones want to do individual sports, they do not have duty like people who do group sports. Hence, if she or he does not have sense or energy for doing sports, he or she can stay at home easily.
Because not only she does not pay money for a gym but also she does not have responsibility.
Another reason which deserves some word here is that a group sport helps people to improve social skill. To shed more light on this matter, since human does sports in a gym, they meet a lot of people so that they find suitable friends in this place. Also, people on a sports team, learn how to cooperate with other people. As we know, team sports can become successful if the member of groups has cooperation effectively. In this situation, people learn how to focus on their aim and how to make a strong bond with other people for becoming a flourishing person.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that team sports have many advantageous points than an individual sport. I believe that people who participated in team sports not only doing sports regularly bus also increasing their social interaction.
- TPO 43 Integrated Writing Task 90
- TPO 43 70
- Do you agree or disagree? To improve quality of education university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 60
- TPO 55 73
- To improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors 68
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, as for, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72599531616 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65823540486 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0632918439 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260471624281 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827528553345 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712606628724 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131483806224 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803419854236 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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