“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Internet technology regarded as one of the most important inventions discovered by the human being, and it becomes handy for every person. Personally, I believe that the internet becomes one of the essential part that has a great influence on our life. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Communication between people living abroad becomes easy and more exciting using internet technology. moreover, the quality of calls sounds has been improved since incorporation of this technology with telecommunications center. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I remember when I was a kid, my uncle had gotten his visa to USA. after he traveled, he used to call us every month, and the quality of calls were not clear. Furthermore, the cost of calling was very expensive. In contrast, even I am living away from my family, I am able to call them everyday at any time I want from the comfort of my home using different programs with help of using the internet. In addition, I am able to see them using video call and we feel like we are living together in one home.
Secondly, Internet helps students to do their research using different resources from overall the world, this is because any new discovery or research even any book have been easy for student to look at using just a computer. For instance, when a professor give me assignment to do research on dental implant, He wanted a subject that was not discussed before. when I want to the library I was like confused how to start and from where to begin. However, when I used the internet google searching for new inventions, It helps me a lot to build a new concepts about new subject that help me in writing my thesis.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that Internet has a huge influence on our life. This is because it helps the communications between families living far away from each others, and because all students researches have been performed very easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ore exciting using internet technology. moreover, the quality of calls sounds has been i...
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Suggestion: After
...d, my uncle had gotten his visa to USA. after he traveled, he used to call us every m...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... from my family, I am able to call them everyday at any time I want from the comfort of ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... subject that was not discussed before. when I want to the library I was like confus...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'concept'?
Suggestion: concept
...tions, It helps me a lot to build a new concepts about new subject that help me in writi...
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Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arches have been performed very easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72934472934 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7636091275 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4292444531 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1410788698 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446153729176 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466387051468 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809681671336 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015776428195 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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