Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children’s education have always drawn parent’s attention whenever we are. They will always happy when we are admitted by our dream school. Due to the change of society, however, the educational pattern has changed over time. Some people notice that modern education require more participation of parents. For me, I’m an advocate of the idea mentioned above.
First, parents always didn’t have the ability to involve in their children’s education even though they would like to. Because of the low developing level of past society, most of the children at that time had no opportunity to enroll in the education. Large proportion of people are illiterate. For example, my grandparents never went to school when they were young. They are virtually incapable of assisting my father’s study. However, both of my parents went to university due to the widespread of compulsory education. As a result, they are able to tutor me. When I was in middle school, my mum helped me solve many thorny math question which had troubled me for a long time. Finally, I got a relative great grades in graduation test. Today, even though my parents can’t understand the language in my textbook, they can still give me some tutorial when I have problem with some knowledge point.
Also, difference in the social fabric and attitudes also attributes to the less participation in the past. Labor-intensive work dominates the type of work people that people usually involved. Most of the work the mass engaged only required physical work rather than brain work, such as farming. As a result, many boys had to give up their study and went into farmland at an early age, when they were supposed to study in the classroom, and girls had to raise their children and do some chores or textile work at home. Thus, neither of them have the ability of tutor their children. Statistics from UN shows that almost 80 percent of people in China were illiterate at 1950s, which was a shocking number, as most of the work at that time didn’t need people to be literate.
Furthermore, fierce competition in modern society forces parents to participate in their children’s education. Some innovative ideas nowadays emphasizes the combination of school and family education. Parents all want their children to have a brighter future. Take my cousin as an example, he is in Grade 1 this year. One of his task in winter vacation is making a poster in English with the assistance of parents. Also, his mother said that they always have such task to complete because the primary school nowadays make an effort to strength the collaboration with family.
For all of the reasons I mentioned above, I believe the parents have more involvement in children’s education in modern society than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun math seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much thorny math', 'a good deal of thorny math'.
Suggestion: much thorny math; a good deal of thorny math
...n middle school, my mum helped me solve many thorny math question which had troubled me for a lo...
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Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'grade'?
Suggestion: grade
...g time. Finally, I got a relative great grades in graduation test. Today, even though ...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...th the collaboration with family. For all of the reasons I mentioned above, I believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99137931034 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7320344684 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530172413793 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3712882897 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67857142857 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214718803989 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580109128552 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767397940586 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14653529146 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757842194004 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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