A part-time job is beneficial for young people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
The debate on whether or not advantages part-time jobs for kids outweigh their potential disadvantages has been garnering a wide range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration to examine the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit that part-time work has many pros for children. On the other hand, some others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and aver that each child should be encouraged to involve in part-time jobs. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be considered is a stable income. youngsters often complain about their financial situation; therefore, getting part-time works would be a great opportunity to start earning money. a vivid example that can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experiences. During my studies to get a master's degree in an engineering field, I worked as a part-time lecturer to cover my tuition fees. Fortunately, stipends from this part-time job had covered all my tuition fees. So, having a stable income is the first benefit comes to your mind.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that having a part-time job teaches children not only how to earn money, but also how to spend money wisely at a young age. To be specific, earning money at a young age always learn youngsters the importance of spending money wisely. For instance, my brother had never been good with money and he used to be prodigal before he started working in a supermarket during summer breaks. During work in a supermarket, he has learned how to spend money very wisely.
Thirdly, the part-time job provides youngsters with many crucial skills, like time management and communication skills. The tight schedule would learn children how to arrange their priorities in life. And the working environment would learn them how to communicate easily with others.
To wrap it up, contemplating all aforesaid reasons, one can soon realize the importance of a part-time job for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03611111111 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76418758855 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0363739562 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.65 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187512518585 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576662988555 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502555663422 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111375992265 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164878631045 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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