Choosing a career is an important step in a person’s life. To identify a job that would lead to a secure and successful future requires effort. Is it easier for the people in the past than in the present? From my point of view, the answer is yes.
The first comparison that can be made is between the number of jobs in the present and in the past. Nowadays we have much more types of jobs. To name a few, some new jobs are: software engineers, food deliverers and social media influencers. The increased number of jobs increases the difficulty for a person to identify the right job that he or she can stick to for a lifetime. In the past, however, one could investigate the relatively limited range of jobs, like farmers, politician, teachers, to find the one that is the most promising.
The second factor that makes the judgement about a job more difficult today, is the fast pace of changing in society. With the development of science and technology, new types jobs have been created, but meanwhile, lots of jobs have been destroyed. The advent of Artificial Intelligence, for example, will probably eliminate the need for drivers. A secure job in the present may be insecure in 20 years. But hundreds of years ago, people could easily predict whether a job would be secure for the rest of their lives, based merely on their experiences, because the society did not change much during that time.
Admittedly, there are more ways to gather the information about different types of jobs today. But that does not make job choosing easier. The standard of success has changed. In old times when the major need of humans is material, a man can be regarded as successful when he could earn enough to support his family. The present days, nevertheless, see many people considering a career successful if it fulfills their spiritual need, as material need is no longer dominating. The pursuit of spiritual fulfillment, requires people to identify their true interest based on which they pick an ideal job. Such a pursuit is far more difficult than identifying the most profitable job based on public criterion in the past.
Therefore, I think finding a job that is the most secure and successful for oneself nowadays, is more challenging than in the past. But that does not mean our time is worse. To the contrary, that opens more doors for us to identity what we truly want.
- SCANDALS WHETHER IN POLITICS, ACADEMIA, OR OTHER AREAS CAN BE USEFUL. THEY FOCUS OUR ATTENTION ON PROBLEMS IN WAYS THAT NO SPEAKER OR REFORMERS EVER COULD 83
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 73
- the rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict. 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76385542169 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66235510545 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534939759036 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5439078014 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2916666667 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280163989586 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077720473696 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062702236151 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164542148208 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631508884488 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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