People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more and something different.
Human beings are always fond of having more and more which have led us to more developed and advance technology as well as bad impact on environment and humans as well. This is the reason people compared to past days have modern transportation technology and advance weapon to destroy human, natural resources and natural habitats. People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more and something different. So , looking at the statement made, I believe that people are never satisfied with what they have.
The first reason is that, people are always fond of asking more in their lives. When people want something more, they make more effort towards it and todays world is the result of asking more. For example, I had an uncle who always showed great efforts to get best score in his university. I always saw him studying hard and always involving in those things which gave me some knowledge related to his faculty. He was one of the best students among his batch members. He graduated and thought of having job in a top company and with al his effort he got the job but still he was un satisfied with his salary as his expectation of living his life was high. He further changed his company and went for higher salary ti the next company but still I saw him unsatisfied as he was not appointed to senior position. This makes clear that people are never satisfied and always want something more.
The second reason is that, People always want something different in their lives. People are always excited to get new things. Whatever they get it whether they want it or not, but they always want something different from the previous one with in short period of time. For example, I bought jacket for $ 350 and it was really god. It took me 3 moth to create savings for that jacket. It was one of my dream to get it. As soon as I bought it, I showed to my friend and family and they made comments like I should have taken some other color. After two days, I was satisfied with the old one and wanted to get jacket of different color. This clearly, explains that [people always want something different.
In summation, whatever and however things people get, they always of have expectation of getting something more and something different. That’s why, I believe people are never satisfied with what they have in any form. They always gets satisfied with in short period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mething more and something different. So , looking at the statement made, I believ...
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Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xpectation of living his life was high. He further changed his company and went fo...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ent from the previous one with in short period of time. For example, I bought jacket for $ 350...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
... time. For example, I bought jacket for $ 350 and it was really god. It took me 3 mot...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'moth' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'moths'.
Suggestion: moths
...350 and it was really god. It took me 3 moth to create savings for that jacket. It w...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
...rent color. This clearly, explains that [people always want something different. ...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...what they have in any form. They always gets satisfied with in short period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, well, for example, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65258215962 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33803217363 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462441314554 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.635238147 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.617182258739 0.236089414692 261% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207238084331 0.076458572812 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209815156942 0.0737576698707 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.452252061894 0.150856017488 300% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128689639874 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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