People attend college or universities for many reason what do you think which one is better
Education has always played a significant role in one's life. Though there is no shortage of reasons that why people attend university, from my point of view, I think that they pursue their higher education, fundamentally, because it not only helps them to build strong social communication skills but also. It changes them to an influential person in their communities that it can play a significant role in their country's overall economic growth.
During their tertiary education, people are more likely to be attached to a large number of people of different thoughts and levels so that it will help them to learn how to communicate with different personalities appropriately. It is a very significant point to intercommunicate with one according to his/her level to avoid misunderstanding and conflictions. My first day at University, for instance, when I entered the office Because I had never talked to a university president before, I was rude to him: I negotiated with him informally like a friend of mine, so it caused me to be withdrawn from the University. Had I had a good communication skill, I have not been banished from our university.
Besides the affirmative impacts of tertiary education on our social skills, it also changes us to the fruitful person in our life, which plays a significant role in our congregation's advancements. When ones grow up and seek education, they acquire knowledge of life: they thrive physically, personally, financially, and mentally, which it initiates the Constitution of an improved, advanced or improved constituency or civilisation.
To put them all in a nutshell, one heed University not only because it cultivates their social abilities, but also it shifts them to a sample symbol of their constituencies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...has always played a significant role in ones life. Though there is no shortage of re...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... strong social communication skills but also. It changes them to an influential pers...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...eople are more likely to be attached to a large number of people of different thoughts and levels...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife: they thrive physically, personally, financially, and mentally, which it init...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20701754386 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34519772201 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.940579312 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119360763754 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044327011351 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030629179503 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689098647163 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148509704972 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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