some of us want to apply for college or university and some of us do not want for different reasons. in this case we want discuss about the first category of people. the reasons of these people are their needs and dreams. somebody needs education for her or his future job and somebody needs it for more knowledge in her or his favorite field. and in some case, people want to go to university or college for learn about social relationships in this small environment for have a better life in world environment.
for first, people need education for have a better job. now a days there is a lot of competition for the job. so people who have better points can win in this competition and earn better job. these points are somethings like education, social relationship, proficiency, age and etc.
secondly, some people have a favorite field and have dreams for it. they like especial field and they want increase their knowledge and proficiency in this field. so they want to be in environment that can help them to know and learn more about their favorite field.
thirdly, some people want to go to college or university for have a better social relationship. we live in social world and if we want have a better place in this world we should have better communication skills. and we can learn and practice about these skills in some small environments like college or university.
all in all, every person who decide for going to college and university has her or him own reasons and these reasons depend on what they want from their life and what they need for their wants. so they will make this decision for reasons like increase their knowledge, better job, new experiences and etc.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solution that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5517978229 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414715719064 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9566284656 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5294117647 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227883420036 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934276985957 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746461786472 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141897329767 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668971840822 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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