People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Among so many blessings that humans possess, I think health is one of the most important ones. Even though being healthy is a crucial gift and people should appreciate it at any age, As a person gets older, this issue becomes more important. People do several various things to stay healthy in their life. As far as I am concerned, eating wholesome food and doing regular exercise have a pivotal role in human health. The reasons why I believe so will be elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, I think it would be no exaggeration if I state that consuming healthy food is the basic factor of being healthy. If people eat foods that are not very nutritive and salubrious, they are putting their bodies in danger. I mean, fast foods and barbeques are indeed very delicious and tempting, but they will lead to many serious digestive problems. Moreover, drinking too many sodas will increase the amount of sugar in blood and results in diseases. On the other hand, by eating wholesome food, one can dramatically strengthen his or her body and decrease the probability of getting sick in their youth and hopefully in old ages.
Second, it is crystal clear that exercising regularly can improve both physical and mental situations. Doing exercise can prevent heart diseases, also, it will control the weight and averts obesity. It stands to reason that by doing exercise one becomes fit. Furthermore, doing regular exercise will help mental health. The more exercise one does, the more powerful and healthy their mind will be, and the better the life will become. It is statistically proven that people who do exercises regularly, they will be healthier in old ages. For example, I had two grandfathers which they were about the same age. One of them was a physics teacher who never exercised throughout his life, unfortunately, he died when he was sixty, because of a massive heart attack. He spent his last years in sickness and got very depressed. On the other hand, my other grandfather is an athletic man. He runs every morning for half an hour, and also, goes hiking once in a while. Although he is 85 years old now, he is very healthy and happy.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that people should eat wholesome and nourishing food to stay healthy and prevent serious illnesses. Also, by exercising regularly they can have a better life for a long time. I think these are the most important factors that will assure us to live long and happy.
- TPO 56 80
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- TPO 42 Integrated Writing Task 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78604651163 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939308147 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551162790698 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7240550627 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.32 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177833276247 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576414491299 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707322852632 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114015836573 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716462145365 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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