Health is the most precious thing in the world. If, someone not comfortable with health condition nothing can give him happiness. Every people have their own strategies to keep body fit and healthy, Some people are doing many thing to Stay healthy. In my personal experience healthy food, routine life and gym is essential to leading a healthy life. In the following paragraph, I will explain my strategies more clearly.
To begin with, food habit are one of the precious strategies to be healthy. If you want to be healthy and comfortable in daily life you need to eat regular basis and nutrient food. Balance diet means eat less and nutrient food like fruits. If someone able to avoid rice he can lead a healthy life and consuming lots of fruits help people to live long. My grandfather he is now 95 years old but he still healthy and comfortable in walking. At the age of 35 he adopt a strategy to eat less rice that keep him still healthy.
In addition, early to rise, early to bed, make a man perfect. Routine life is the most important element to lead a healthy life. Routine life means when you eat, when you take rest, When you sleep all are in a diagram. If someone lead a routine life and do the entire task without making any mistake it help the person live healthy.
Finally, in my personal experience if someone went gym everyday he will happy with his body condition and health. Gym give a great opportunity to exercise that help to reduce extra weight. If someone are slim and comfortable he is able to lead healthy life. Every day exercise help to control some diseases like blood presser, diabetic and it also help to increase metabolism rate.
In sum, above discussion it clear that if we want to lead a healthy life, we need to take balance food , lead a routine life and every day went gym for exercise. If we obey all the strategies it will help us to stay healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the most precious thing in the world. If, someone not comfortable with health co...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ndition nothing can give him happiness. Every people have their own strategies to kee...
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Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egies to keep body fit and healthy, Some people are doing many thing to Stay heal...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...fit and healthy, Some people are doing many thing to Stay healthy. In my personal experie...
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Line 4, column 460, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adopts'.
Suggestion: adopts
...ortable in walking. At the age of 35 he adopt a strategy to eat less rice that keep h...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
... sleep all are in a diagram. If someone lead a routine life and do the entire task w...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...tire task without making any mistake it help the person live healthy. Finally, in...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...with his body condition and health. Gym give a great opportunity to exercise that he...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...help to reduce extra weight. If someone are slim and comfortable he is able to lead...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ike blood presser, diabetic and it also help to increase metabolism rate. In sum,...
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Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...sm rate. In sum, above discussion it clear that if we want to lead a healthy life,...
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Line 10, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...althy life, we need to take balance food , lead a routine life and every day went ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fe and every day went gym for exercise. If we obey all the strategies it will help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54518950437 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39898508996 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475218658892 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0205263372 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2380952381 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123048411453 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404838801582 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065192427451 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770885212598 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624040348374 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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