The six bar charts represent the use of water in percentage for three different purposes in six areas in the world.
Overall, water mainly used for industrial, agricultural and domestic purpose. North America and Europe used lion share of water for industrial purpose and remains four areas used highest percentages of water for agricultural use.
Africa, central Asia and south East Asia used above 80% of their water for agricultural purpose while Africa use 84%, central Asia used highest 88% and south East Asia use 81%. South America used near three quarter for agricultural purpose. Among these four areas South American people used highest 19% of water for domestic use and vary few percent used for industrial use.
On the other hand, North America used near a half of total amount of water for industrial purpose and only 39% water for agricultural use. However, Europe used highest percentage of water for industrial use among all the area of the world and a third water used for agriculture. Europe and North America used 15% and 13% respectably for domestic purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'used the highest'.
Suggestion: used the highest
...r for agricultural use. However, Europe used highest percentage of water for industrial use ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 13% respectably for domestic purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10055865922 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49242164626 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430167597765 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6366880815 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478528232269 0.215688989381 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278377136271 0.103423049105 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172967982605 0.0843802449381 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415099443583 0.15604864568 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159113028363 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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