People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
A life of a person who lives in a contemporary world is full of difficulties and stress, there is no doubt about it; those stressful situations are unavoidable and we have to figure out a way to handle them. From my viewpoint participating to diverse physical activities, reading are the best ways to address everyday stress. I would like to support my stance with the following reasons.
Firstly, participation to a variety of sport activities is an unquestionably efficient way to relax. The usefulness of sport is doubtless, in fact, it is a reason why participation to sport is required in almo...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 487 350 //can you type the words in 30 minutes in actual test room?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30 //score could be more in actual TOEFL exam.
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 487 350
No. of Characters: 2268 1500
No. of Different Words: 260 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.779 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.056 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.987 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'honestly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216266173752 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.170055452865 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083179297597 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406654343808 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646950092421 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105360443623 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0332717190388 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87480872426 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0462107208872 0.0309702414327 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00369685767098 0.00188951952338 196% => OK
Determiners: 0.103512014787 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147874306839 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184842883549 0.0139019557991 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2827.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 491.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75763747454 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34215885947 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244399185336 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187372708758 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124236252546 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87480872426 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537678207739 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.9284464543 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8421052632 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8689276504 48.84282405 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.789473684 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8421052632 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 50.2820237968 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.28859060403 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280243118355 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0892385103832 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717697694434 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505811629237 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202848568432 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107026512217 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061051783712 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31146457234 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701130412952 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176476711241 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753770620612 0.0618886996521 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.