Some people prefer to live in the city while others are more comfortable in the countryside.
Why do you think some people have a preference?
Are there particular ages when living in the city or the country suit better?
Living in a megalopolis or a village has some features which may be seen by younger and older people differently. This essay will look more closely at those features and which age may be a preference.
To begin with, life in a city is seen as more robust, energetic, and dynamic as there is often something happening. Moreover, urban areas, on average, have a lower rate of unemployment and there are considerably more job prospects for people of working age.
At the same time, life in a rural area is perceived as a calmer and more peaceful. For instance, there are only a few ways to have fun or relax as there are fewer diversions such as theatres and art galleries. Furthermore, there is a growing concern about rural unemployment which has led to the depopulation of the countryside. Thus, some people may tend to believe that the country fits more to elderly and retired individuals who have their savings and pensions.
However, older people are not always keen to leave urban areas; in fact, many retired people who used to live in the countryside have moved from their villages and small towns. The reason is that the major cities provide that category of individuals with more healthcare, social benefits and opportunities to socialize. For example, those with limited social interaction may be able to meet new people .
To sum up, it is widely believed that senior citizens prefer to live in the countryside, whereas young individuals tend to inhabit sprawling cities. However, the elderly may find more support and care in the urban areas; thus they might leave their village homes and moved to cities. In other words, it is possible that megalopolises meet the needs of all ages.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Need more content for 'Are there particular ages when living in the city or the country suit better?'. The third paragraph is only about seniors. Some discussions needed for other ages like young people .
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1366 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.71 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.589 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.495 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thing happening. Moreover, urban areas, on average, have a lower rate of unemplo...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...teraction may be able to meet new people . To sum up, it is widely believed tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88965517241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70712742024 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3746797159 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254729592203 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077372647188 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515687721461 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131827373439 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018678071072 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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