Once there was a famous musician said, the music is the god's language. This convincing evaluation is enough to prove that music is important to many people. As a music fan, I should say that the music is amolst a part of my life, because it shows up whenever you want it just like an old friend, some times the music I listen would also give me strength. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, there is encouragement in the music, which is essential to people. Especially the lyrics. The first time when I heard the song by John Lennon- Hey jude!, I was attracted by the melody. After I saw the lyrics, I got more strength that have been encouraging me for years. It is said, the moment you need is on your shoulders. Surely it is, whatever achievenments I want to gain is all up to myself. Merely with others' help, once can not success if he/she do not determine to do it. So do I, every time I faced the difficulty in my life, I always sung this song in my mind to encourage myself, I got more energy to succumb the problems.
In addion, music to me is a big hobby. It was cantagious to me and kept some good memory of myself. I am in faovr of post-rock, a kind of instrumental rock roll music without lyrics. It sounds like a symphony which the violins and pianos are replaced by guitars and drums. As the heavy drum beats begin, the melody from guitars and basses are so amazing that it is just a rock roll symphony. Whenever I heard this kind of music, I can't help to burry me into the instruments and wait for every beats and solos. Besides, the experince I joined in the music festival was so impressive. Because not only I enjoyed the music I liked, I also made lots of friends who share the same music style with me.
Finally, the music is an excellent mood master. I need to calm down when I solve problems at work. Sometimes I was worrying about my project of work, I would play classical music to make me feel comfortable and composed. It really worked. Also at home, when I was anxious with something in my life, I would play the Mozart or Bach music to make a harmonious environment, then again ,the lyrics of John lennon came in my mind. Everything would be ok, I always said to myself.
In all, music is imporntant to many people like me, as we gain strength from it, we feel calmed down when we listen to it, also, the music is like an old friend to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gods'' or 'god's'?
Suggestion: gods'; god's
... famous musician said, the music is the gods language. This convincing evaluation is...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...rs help, once can not success if he/she do not determine to do it. So do I, every ...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Whenever I heard this kind of music, I cant help to burry me into the instruments a...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ortable and composed. It really worked. Also at home, when I was anxious with someth...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ake a harmonious environment, then again ,the lyrics of John lennon came in my min...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, really, so, then, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26593406593 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41094994309 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512087912088 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2863100341 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8518518519 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175304370186 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458734857968 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462474185096 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108134818986 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451793292872 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.