I agree with the statement that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do. People today are looking forward to having a comfortable life and want to acquire it effortlessly. So, they are distanced from hardworking and learning new skills. The most considerable concerns regarding this attitude are education and physical exercise.
These days, parents are granting technological devices to their children since their childhood. And the point is that the parents never control their children how much to stay busy with their phone, laptop or other technological devices. So, they do not want walk to convey a message verbally to their friends and relatives. They are used to call and they are not taking a pen and paper to write a letter. This way, they get distanced from education. Everyone has to learn how to write a letter and everyone needs to learn how to read a book. Another example regarding this topic is how people are busy Internet surfing. Nowadays, people cannot tolerate to go to a library and find a book to get the very accurate information, but they just sit on their desk, open their laptop and brows on internet that most of them get some false and plagiarized information. In addition, some organizations are trying to officially offer online courses for different degrees of education, such online schools, and online universities. They all cause people not to go out and stay at their home and follow their required lessons.
The second concern is the healthcare of these people. In current time, everyone tries to control everything from their laptop. So, they are not walking a lot. They are staying at their desk 24/7. Similarly, most people are not going to work out. And it is worrying. Even if they need a taxi, they are ordering taxi online. So the taxi comes to their door and take them to their destination.
- Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them 60
- People spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.Do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 35 :Agree/Disagree: In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to calling'.
Suggestion: used to calling
...o their friends and relatives. They are used to call and they are not taking a pen and paper...
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Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'tolerate going', 'tolerate gonna'.
Suggestion: tolerate going; tolerate gonna
...ternet surfing. Nowadays, people cannot tolerate to go to a library and find a book to get the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, second, similarly, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86645962733 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61157228264 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6133922754 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2272727273 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04545454545 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230597467869 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727713295741 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154268546436 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206462381383 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153485542494 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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