A person should never make an important decision alone.
There are uncountable decisions for us to make throughout our lives, which can profoundly influence the future. Some circumstances can not be changed once people make up their minds, and feeling regretful is useless. Therefore, in my opinion, one should not try to make an important decision alone for two reasons.
First of all, when people make decisions alone, they have a limited amount of information, which may lead to a mediocre result. As the saying goes, “The spectators often see the chess game better than the players.” People may believe more strongly in themselves as time passes. However, it’s essential to think thoroughly before making a decision, and a bystander is often much more objective than ourselves. For example, if a person doesn't want to be a slacker’s teammate, the person might give up the whole project in a fit of anger. However, a better solution is to ask the professor for help. Maybe he can get a chance to find another partner, or gain more time for the assignment.
Second, our friends or family could have been in a similar situation we encounter, so by consulting someone who has made a related decision in the past, we can weigh the options more carefully. For instance, if an undergraduate is trying to decide which department to enter in university, he should try discussing it with his parents if he cannot make up his mind. Maybe he’s passionate about both biology and math, but ends up studying medicine because his father, a high school math teacher, reminded him of the difficulty of advanced mathematics. Therefore, it is essential to consider others' advice before making up your mind.
To conclude, I believe that people should make decisions after having a discussion with someone close to them. Because some of them might have already had a similar experience, their suggestions would enable us to make the best final decision.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- A person should never make an important decision alone 76
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98738170347 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77391660667 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9291213001 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25460751381 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823154158208 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998605835009 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158639303974 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853890752364 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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