A person should not take the important decisions alone.
One important decision can change our life. Therefore, we should think twice before doing anything important. Personally, I believe that people should never take important decisions alone. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following passage.
First of all, our elders are more experienced than us so we should consult them before taking any step toward a big decision. Sometimes situations arise where we have taken to make an instant choice to get the result. But, I believe that if that decision has the power to change your life completely then you should talk to someone who is more experienced than you because it will help you to see a broader picture which you were not able to think alone. Consequently, it will help you to think in a better and clear way. I can best demonstrate this through my personal experience. When I was in high school and I was in a situation to decide on the course for my under-graduation. Even though I had already selected the branch, I still consulted with my elder brothers and they helped to take the decision which has supported me to have a better career. Hence, if we are taking any important decision, we should never try to take it alone. However, we should talk to others so that we can understand what we are really missing out.
Secondly, sometimes we think that no one can understand our situation, so it is better to take a decision alone. Whereas I believe that every person's thoughts cannot be the same. Moreover, it is not necessary that everyone has faced the same situation as you are facing right now. But we should not hesitate to talk with them. It may be possible that their advice can help you to get a clarity of the situation, and if you do not find it correct then you can also ignore the suggestion, but there is no harm to discuss our situation with other before taking any important step. For instance, last year, when I was doing my job and planning to quit. so that I can go for higher studies. I thought no will understand my decision that why I am leaving the position and had made up my mind to leave the job. But, then I talk to my senior, and she was very polite and understanding. She also supported my idea and also share her thoughts which help me to plan my future journey. Thus, we should not hesitate to share our feeling regarding a particular situation just because others will not understand it. Rather than they will help you to take a better decision.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it is important that we should not take the important decisions alone. We should talk to our elders as their experience will definitely help us. Further, we should be open with others and not be in hurry to take an important step alone, just because no one will understand your emotion behind that decision.
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- TOEFL integrated writing Altruism 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...equently, it will help you to think in a better and clear way. I can best demonst...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it is better to take a decision alone. Whereas I believe that every persons thoughts c...
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Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... was doing my job and planning to quit. so that I can go for higher studies. I tho...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... I can go for higher studies. I thought no will understand my decision that why I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 9.8082437276 296% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53921568627 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557986779 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445098039216 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0024509215 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6785714286 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268273861443 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879077501295 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10502109116 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230646022295 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652654726094 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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