Computer games are the key part of the modern life. Not only children play computer game but also adults like to experience them. Although some people believe that the games are problematic, however I certainly suggest playing game to all children to some extent. I would provide two main reasons for my choice.
Firstly, computer games can be considered as the entertainment tool of the modern art. It is obvious that companies create games to entertain children and definitely they have reached their goal. There are various types of games in the market such as football game, cars races, strategizes, puzzles, thriller and different funny games. Playing game children can be entertained and have fun. They experience excitements and enjoy the time they are playing. Also, recently new generation of games is developed called virtual reality games with gives users some experience beyond regular games. Using a virtual reality headset, the user can feel the environment and components of the game better and enjoy more. For instance, I had the opportunity to play one of the games. I had the headset on my eyes and two handles in my hands and played a saw game and it was really fun and was really interesting for me, because I felt myself inside of the game environment and not just watching it on the screen. So, surely it would be a great experience for kids too, especially when they play with their friends. You see why I think it is good for children.
Second, computer games can intellectually stimulate the children’s mind. Nowadays, most of the games are educational. They can experience a new world without a need to go out from their room. Playing some specific education games, they can learn more about the history, geography, math and sciences. Also, the puzzle and strategy games can enhance the children’s abilities of problem solving, decision making, critical thinking. Also, the football and race games can improve the children speed in response. Or some specific types of games can enhance their memory. For example, I know a Website named Lumosity. It is a great source to improve your speed, memory, problem solving and focus. I vividly remember, five years ago I was suffering from lack of concentration and I was not able to memorize things well. The website had a regular free schedule which helped me to improve my skills by spending about 30 minutes on its simple games. It was very helpful and efficient way and at the end of the 30 days I could feel the difference. Therefore, I think computer games are good for children.
To sum, the compute games are the important part of the modern life. Children should play the games to improve some of their skills and have fun. However, we should be aware that beside good effects, everything can include some negatives too and computer games are not exceptions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90269151139 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65190156394 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505175983437 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8028962704 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3870967742 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5806451613 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.87096774194 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353998069449 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103884831257 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943115837563 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268091948859 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699735755594 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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