playing computer games is waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, no one can deny the importance of computer in and its influence in our life. And playing computer games is prevelant amongh children today. Some peolpe may hold the opinion that playing copmuter games is a waste of time. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this statement because, obviously, these games have many disadventage and cause many problems. I will try to examine bleow the specific reasons for proving the bad influence of playing copmuter games according to which I think are the most common viewpoints in our society.
First let us look at what a child can typically loss from playing by computers. Communication is the most significant issue in education and teachers and psycologists think when children learn to communicate, they will be prepared for independent life in future. It goes whitout saying that, although computer games make children happy, it isolate them from other people. By way of illustration, my younger brother use to play with computer ten hour in a day. So, he does not find any time to have relationship, even, with other members of family.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. playing copmuter games cause many violent manner in children. To elucidate on, chlidren, usually, intriguted with amazing computer games, but some of these games have many savage action that it is not suitable for any age. For example, in our country, we have increasing number of index crime amongh younger people and it is not good news for us.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that if children, who are students too, addicted by these games, they do not get good score in their course. To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study done in Tehran University, a lot of students who are failed in school because they allocate their valuable time in playing computer games.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some esceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I do agree that children should not be allowed to play copmuter games. To recapitulate the reasons, not only they cannot learn communicate with other people, but also they will have more violent action and also do not gain good scores in their courses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'isolates'?
Suggestion: isolates
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: hours
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236111111111 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.168981481481 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0763888888889 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.046263068375 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671296296296 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127314814815 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0439814814815 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56510284475 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231481481481 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0671296296296 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231481481481 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138888888889 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2255.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87239583333 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3359375 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260416666667 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184895833333 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0911458333333 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56510284475 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549479166667 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.0645041673 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2176930129 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.684210526 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 46.2521929825 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.36434108527 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327747794477 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0753747327722 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696355870431 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472007679207 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167131238379 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112663158362 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672421461698 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26326841518 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0500741424468 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201796159039 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233425132736 0.0618886996521 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.