From a broad perspective, in the current state of affairs we face, in which technology become an integral part of world. It is far-fetched to presume that computers are represented as significant device for science. Computers has been using for different purposes. I concur with the view that children should not be permitted to play computer as they are time-consuming. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, kids are adversely affected by playing computer games because they spend too much on them and they do not have enough time to doing their assignments. So their academic performance will be affected and they cannot get high score in their exam. They will be addicted since they squander a lot of time on computer. As an example, my nephew played computer a lot and because of that he could not do well in his lessons. So their parents did not let him play.
Moreover, wasting a great deal of time create a lot of problem for children. Actually improper and prolonged use of computer by a growing segment of kids creates disorders including weak eyesight, backache and spine disease and so on. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was in high school, I used to play computer games everyday and I really suffered from backache and when I reduced the hours which I spent, my pain started to relieve.
Thirdly, squandering time on computer have influence on the social behavior of teenager. They tend to be alone and spend time with themselves. So they cannot get on well with people as they have not had communication with other people. Actually they incline to get away from people and it makes them more aloof. Also, there are many article about that which researcher want parents to not to allowed their children to playing computer.
In conclusion, I believe that the children who play computer games waste their time and their parent must not let them play.
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- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 60
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
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- Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Atlantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews of frog croaks, so they called 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...er, wasting a great deal of time create a lot of problem for children. Actually improper and pro...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...h school, I used to play computer games everyday and I really suffered from backache and...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun article seems to be countable; consider using: 'many articles'.
Suggestion: many articles
... makes them more aloof. Also, there are many article about that which researcher want parent...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'articles'?
Suggestion: articles
...s them more aloof. Also, there are many article about that which researcher want parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, really, so, third, thirdly, well, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80415430267 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64505066161 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540059347181 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3463166419 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.95 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402624037432 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116125182353 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121745651632 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248329756536 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106952141823 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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