Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Travel in your own country is a wonderful experience. You can interact with the beautiful that surround you and make friends close home. You can grow as a human being and discover something new at the same time. Traveling your own nation is more beneficial that going outside your land. I agree with this statement because if money and safety are your priorities, then domestic travel can mitigate the inconvenience of long flights, a potential language barrier and any financial difficulty you might encounter in your trip.
First of all, one of the advantages you can have is getting to know your history and your heritage more in deep. By doing so you will have the possibility to know your culture. Additionally, your cultural background will be widely expanded. I remember the first time I visited New York. What a remarkable experience I had. My family and I traveled with the companion of a guide to every landmark. We also stayed at a cousin’s house, so we were able to visit her and save money. In contrast, if you decide to travel abroad you must spend money buying airplane tickets and reserving the cheapest hotels if you want to save. This could be very inconvenient.
Secondly, visiting your country have more advantages. For example, no need to worry about the language barrier since it is your own language. This allow you to perfectly communicate during your trip. You can meet new friends, enjoy a movie, visit museums, parks. You can also drive your own car, so you can travel for less. I have a colleague at work who went to China a couple of years ago. He was so stressed and afraid of the new language that decided to take an entry level course before engaging in his trip. He had to spend extra money buying new clothes because he traveled during winter time. He also spent almost a thousand of dollars in a plane ticket, using all his savings.
Finally, if you have a busy schedule, you can fit your trip by combining long weekends and holidays. Very convenient. You can visit family and friends. Another advantage; no need of extra vaccinations since you are not traveling abroad. For example, last year during thanksgiving weekend I was able to combine my vacation days with the holiday, and ended it up with almost a week free, to enjoy with my family in California. Those simple things can make your destination easy and more enjoyable and might inspire you to make future trips. This is another advantage versus traveling outside.
To conclude, I firmly agree that traveling in your own country instead visiting a foreign destination is better. People can benefit more when travelling in their own country because it is safe, affordable and brings the opportunity to stay in touch with family and friends. I consider this opportunity very rewarming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...because he traveled during winter time. He also spent almost a thousand of dollars...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81666666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62883318012 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514583333333 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7701969349 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309643465305 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856711025456 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772401813875 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206752616887 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605107444354 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.