The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are important to younger individuals or to the older people has been debated for many years. I adhere to the idea that the opinions of celebrities is more essential for younger people than old people. In what follows, wo conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that younger people don't have enough time to concentrate on the lifestyle of celebrities as they just want to obtain knowledge. I feel this is a misleading idea. In these days, individuals who are young want to live like celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, and they enthusiastic for their dress and their lifestyle. Younger people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience is a compelling example to illuminate my idea. When I was a little boy, there was a famous athletes having a very famous muscular body. I wanted to have a body like him; hence I initiated to search on a google about his lifestyle such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I don't focus on his lifestyle.
Moreover, pay attention to celebrities opinion will bring us a lot confidence. As we try to dress like famous person, we will gain a lot of confidence. In the street there are a lot of diffident and shy people whereas we do not want to akin to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we have a lot of confidence. For instance, when I went to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing like him, and by dressing like him I wanted to upsurge my confidence. I, however. don't have any tendency to celebrities lifestyle since I grew older and could not follow them.
In conclusion, I subscribe to idea younger individuals are more willing to pay attention to celebrities opinions that older people. This is due to the idea that, younger people needed prestige and confidence, so their tendency is more to celebrities opinions than old individuals
The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are important to younger individuals or to the older people has been debated for many years. I adhere to the idea that the opinions of celebrities is more essential for younger people than old people. In what follows, wo conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that younger people don't have enough time to concentrate on the lifestyle of celebrities as they just want to obtain knowledge. I feel this is a misleading idea. In these days, individuals who are young want to live like celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, and they enthusiastic for their dress and their lifestyle. Younger people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience is a compelling example to illuminate my idea. When I was a little boy, there was a famous athletes having a very famous muscular body. I wanted to have a body like him; hence I initiated to search on a google about his lifestyle such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I don't focus on his lifestyle.
Moreover, pay attention to celebrities opinion will bring us a lot confidence. As we try to dress like famous person, we will gain a lot of confidence. In the street there are a lot of diffident and shy people whereas we do not want to akin to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we have a lot of confidence. For instance, when I went to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing like him, and by dressing like him I wanted to upsurge my confidence. I, however. don't have any tendency to celebrities lifestyle since I grew older and could not follow them.
In conclusion, I subscribe to idea younger individuals are more willing to pay attention to celebrities opinions that older people. This is due to the idea that, younger people needed prestige and confidence, so their tendency is more to celebrities opinions than old individuals
The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are important to younger individuals or to the older people has been debated for many years. I adhere to the idea that the opinions of celebrities is more essential for younger people than old people. In what follows, wo conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that younger people don't have enough time to concentrate on the lifestyle of celebrities as they just want to obtain knowledge. I feel this is a misleading idea. In these days, individuals who are young want to live like celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, and they enthusiastic for their dress and their lifestyle. Younger people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience is a compelling example to illuminate my idea. When I was a little boy, there was a famous athletes having a very famous muscular body. I wanted to have a body like him; hence I initiated to search on a google about his lifestyle such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I don't focus on his lifestyle.
Moreover, pay attention to celebrities opinion will bring us a lot confidence. As we try to dress like famous person, we will gain a lot of confidence. In the street there are a lot of diffident and shy people whereas we do not want to akin to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we have a lot of confidence. For instance, when I went to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing like him, and by dressing like him I wanted to upsurge my confidence. I, however. don't have any tendency to celebrities lifestyle since I grew older and could not follow them.
In conclusion, I subscribe to idea younger individuals are more willing to pay attention to celebrities opinions that older people. This is due to the idea that, younger people needed prestige and confidence, so their tendency is more to celebrities opinions than old individuals
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are importa...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are some who argue that younger people dont have enough time to concentrate on the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...le such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 870, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 929, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I dont focus on his lifestyle. Moreover, pay ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'actor'?
Suggestion: actor
...t to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing lik...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dont
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...ebrities opinions than old individuals The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are importa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are some who argue that younger people dont have enough time to concentrate on the ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 468, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 791, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...le such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 870, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 929, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I dont focus on his lifestyle. Moreover, pay ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'actor'?
Suggestion: actor
...t to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing lik...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 546, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dont
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 7, column 546, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 108.0 43.0788530466 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 114.0 52.1666666667 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3632.0 1977.66487455 184% => OK
No of words: 786.0 407.700716846 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62086513995 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29487408139 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79689026615 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.225190839695 0.524837075471 43% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1195.2 618.680645161 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6970105646 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1621621622 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2432432432 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64864864865 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404117960739 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137551600554 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208043722639 0.0737576698707 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36241966422 0.150856017488 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258798847947 0.0645574589148 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are importa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are some who argue that younger people dont have enough time to concentrate on the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...le such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 870, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 929, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I dont focus on his lifestyle. Moreover, pay ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'actor'?
Suggestion: actor
...t to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing lik...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dont
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...ebrities opinions than old individuals The question of whether the opinions of celebrities are importa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are some who argue that younger people dont have enough time to concentrate on the ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... people think that when they follow the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 468, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...the celebrities opinion, they will have a lot of cachet and prestige. I think my own experience...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 791, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...le such as kind of food he eats and how many time he exercises during a day. I felt that ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 870, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cachet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cachets'.
Suggestion: a lot of cachets
...felt that having a body like him brings a lot of cachet to me. On the contrary, as I grew older...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 929, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me. On the contrary, as I grew older, I dont focus on his lifestyle. Moreover, pay ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... to them, so we commence to imitate the celebrities life style; therefore we think that we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'actor'?
Suggestion: actor
...t to go school, I dressed like a famous actors since I was too shy before dressing lik...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 546, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dont
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Line 7, column 546, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to upsurge my confidence. I, however. dont have any tendency to celebrities lifest...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 108.0 43.0788530466 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 114.0 52.1666666667 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3632.0 1977.66487455 184% => OK
No of words: 786.0 407.700716846 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62086513995 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29487408139 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79689026615 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.225190839695 0.524837075471 43% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1195.2 618.680645161 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6970105646 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1621621622 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2432432432 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64864864865 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404117960739 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137551600554 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208043722639 0.0737576698707 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36241966422 0.150856017488 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258798847947 0.0645574589148 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.