The question of who has the most influence on people has been debated for many years. I strongly believe that the most important things people learn are from books and internet, and not from their families. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, of course there are some who argue that people learn important things from families. I think this is a miss-guiding idea. In these days, people are more interested in reading books for relinquishing their obsessions, and meanwhile, they learn a lot of pivotal things, which they can’t learn it from their families. For instance, when I was a little boy, my father always told me that I should keep my money in my pocket and don't spend it, but I read from a book that I can make money from a little money that my father gave me. My father couldn’t learn me to earn money from my previous income, but that book taught me this critical thing.
Secondly, people are spending an enormous amount of their life on the internet. There are a lot of information in internet which have many effects in people life. I am of the opinion that people learne a lot of crucial things from social networks, and not from their families. For example, I learned from internet that the best time for sleeping for people is between 10 until 11, but my parents every time told me that You should sleep before 9 o’clock. In social networks I figured out my job was total exacerbate my health system. I consider all of these to be things that I should be deeply concerned about.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people learn important things from internet and book. This is because books and social networks have some information that our parents don’t know about them.
First of all, of course there are some who argue that people learn important things from families. I think this is a mis-guiding idea. In these days, people are more interested in reading books for relinquishing their obsessions, and meanwhile, they learn a lot of pivotal things, which they can’t learn it from their families. For instance, when I was a little boy, my father always told me that I should keep my money in my pocket and don't spend it, but I read from a book that I can make money from a little money that my father gave me. My father couldn’t learn me to earn money from my previous income but that book taught this critical thing.
Secondly, people are spending an enormous amount of their life in internet. There are a lot of information in internet which have many effects in peoples life. I am of the opinion that people learned a lot of crucial things from social networks, and not from their families. For example, I learned from internet that the best time for sleeping for people is between 10 until 11, but my parents every time told me that You should sleep before 9 o’clock. In social networks I figured out my job was total exacerbate my health system. I consider all of these to be things that I should be deeply concerned about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52608695652 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42226986613 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8499599054 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6363636364 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311336363942 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12978712744 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081598924608 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257806430368 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143731836296 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.