Question: Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
There is no doubt that schools play a pivotal role in the education of the students. As schools are the first educational Institutions where students learn both academic and social skills. If my school ever attains a gift of money, I feel it will be better for the school to spend that money on building a sports complex and library facility. I will explain the reasons for my perspective in the following paragraphs.
First of all, Sports activities should be considered an important aspect of student education. Undoubtedly, Schools are meant for academic education, but sports are also essential for the students as academic education. To be more specific, without Sports Students would not be able to learn social skills which include teamwork, respect others' opinions, temperament, and perform under pressure. Therefore, it is the fundamental responsibility of schools to provide the student's playgrounds where students can practice all these social skills and when they come to practical fields they already know all these skills to become successful in life. I would like to demonstrate my School example to illustrate my point of view. I remember our School was granted money from the government. The administration of our School had decided to utilize that money in building a sports complex. Our school had built the best sports complex in the city. It includes sections for different playgrounds, So, all the students had enjoyed their favorite sports. I used to play soccer each day with my classmates. We used to play with other classes where we have to deal with pressure every day. During these matches, I had learned a lot of social skills, which help me a lot in my practical Field. Hence, it is proved that Schools should consider sports seriously and spend money on sports to facilitate their students.
On top of that, schools can use the allotted money on building a library. Schools should be considered libraries as an important part of their institutions. To explain broadly, without libraries schools would not be considered educational Institutions. If the school would have a library the chances are more likely that the school will provide a plethora of scholars and competent people in all the fields. Likewise, if schools do not have libraries students coming out from these schools will be lacking incompetency. I will like to elaborate my perspective by mentioning the example of my school. I used to study in Army Public School. Our school lacked a library facility, because of that I never had a habit of reading books. When I come to the practice field, I had to pass the TOEFL English language exam which required high marks in reading. As I had never developed a habit of reading books I find it hard to pass that exam. If our school had a library, I would have developed a habit of reading books and had Pass TOEFL reading easily. Therefore, due to this fact I consider that Schools should have libraries to enlighten their Students so they can develop the habit of reading.
In summation, from the above-mentioned discussion, When It comes to spending school should consider Sports and libraries their top priority. Because both these facilities are an integral part of students' education. As sports are pivotal for the students for learning social skills, and libraries play their role by developing reading habits to the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...academic education. To be more specific, without Sports Students would not be abl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on sports to facilitate their students. On top of that, schools can use the allo...
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Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...schools will be lacking incompetency. I will like to elaborate my perspective by men...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m which required high marks in reading. As I had never developed a habit of readin...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ports and libraries their top priority. Because both these facilities are an integral p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, i feel, no doubt, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2827.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03024911032 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79137716039 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414590747331 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.9 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2722951112 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.34375 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189140926968 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656234406725 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551140489653 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139380062942 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539219786057 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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