QUESTION:IN TWENTY YEARS THERE WILL BE FEWER CARS IN USE THAN THERE ARE TODAY.
In a modernized world people always face the dilemma to own a car. Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that people will use more cars in their daily life while others would mention that the question depends on a great deal of factors. As far as I’m concerned, I adopt a firm position that the number of cars will decrease in twenty years.
First of all, it’s important to consider the shortage of fuel. Certainly, some people may think that there are enough fuel reservoirs that could supply peoplefor centuries . However, in most cases the resources of fuel is getting depleted. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember that in Southern Turkey most of the reservoirs run out of petroleum and our government started to import from Iraq. This in turn affected the cost of the fuel and people started to use the public transportation more than before. As you can see, shortage of oil affected the usage of private cars and people started to use public transportation.
Equally important is that gas emissions polluted the air.Of course, for some people in some situations, car companies use scientific methods to control the gas emissions.. However, it would be fair to say that for most people cars heavily pollute the air and this causes the health problems. Take a case of Turkey in which there were some protests organized by some health NGOs. They protested that gas emissions causes some respiratory illnesses and these cause people to suffer serious helth problems to theend of their lives. This experience taught Turkish government to measure the sales of cars and urged to take some precautions to prevent this problem.Now in Tukey, a familiy is allowed to buy only one car. As it is clear, due to the the health problems caused by car emissions governments started to control the carsales
Finally, car prices are very high . I’ll be first to admit that car prices doubled in last two years. Despite this possibility,some people may assert that high prices did not reduce the sales. By way of example, I can remember that there were more used-cars advertisements on internet site which is called Sahibinden.com. But when I check this site for used-cars, I see that there are less advertisements. Because in Turkey, the cars which are over twenty years old are not allowed to be used and the price of the new cars are very high due to the taxes.So, reduction in the number of the used cars and high prices of the new cars reduced the number of cars in Turkey. I think that this is the case for many other countries as well.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that in most cases there will be less cars in Turkey in twenty years. Not only will be affected by oil shortages and air pollution but also high price of the cars. That’s why everyone should consider that there will be a surge in the number of the people who will use public transportation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'i think', 'of course', 'first of all', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263814616756 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.158645276292 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802139037433 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338680926916 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0231729055258 0.0685040099705 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140819964349 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0213903743316 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61168496345 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338680926916 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110516934046 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267379679144 0.0209618222197 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124777183601 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2984.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 519.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74951830443 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323699421965 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21387283237 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152215799615 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0963391136802 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61168496345 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45472061657 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.6614846075 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.76 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.463594584 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.36 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.76 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.147283237 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.97520661157 1.45489161554 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231666644471 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116488291508 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855645805561 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50802319668 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157749717222 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923241585384 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809480394441 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434940574654 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0361455191752 0.067059652881 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185854008942 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874120858588 0.0618886996521 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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