Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a man who focuses on one skill only can be more successful than people who develop many different skills. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence in them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that everything changes quickly at present. The only skill cannot be the source for one person in a whole lifetime. For example, in the last past twenty years, clothes maker is a nice job for the youth in my hometown and many of them have their career in the factory. However, since the update for the industry, there have been few clothes factory in my hometown. But the workers in these factories only have the skill to make clothes. As a result, many of them lose their job and fed by the government allowance.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that people who have many skills can be smarter than people who only have one skill. As we all know, it costs much to learn skills. If one person can have many different skills at once, it means he spends more on his own future career. There is more investment in himself, so he could have a more promising future.
What is more, some students are interested in focusing on only one skill. In a word, it sometimes the fear of trying to learn new skills. A man has more skills which indicates that he has more courage to have an acquaintance with the field foreign to him. So he also has the courage to take more chances than common people. His future is more likely to be successful.
- Questions Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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- Questions Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...more successful than people who develop many different skills. But to be frank, I cannot agree...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to learn skills. If one person can have many different skills at once, it means he spends more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34726688103 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27141231459 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3172322462 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364899915375 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108115209467 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130967869885 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244207064883 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12056295359 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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