Reading is better than watching TV
"Reading makes people wit", cited from famous British writer Dickens. Indeed, the basis of human's culture and history as well as other subjects are largely established and recorded by the books. However, with the advent of advanced technology like televisions and mobile phones as well as computers, people are more and more accustomed to the various contents each media provides. These ways well offer different access to wide ranges of information. Nevertheless, I prefer to reading books rather than watching television.
To begin with, the content on television is more chaotic than ordered and repletes with meaningless information. In order to meet the needs of the people from all age group, the program providers tend to include some meaningless contents, for example some TV shows. It only makes the audience laugh as the actor plays exaggeratedly or shout humorously. But after watching, nothing is impressed on their minds. The famous Chinese TV program “Where are dads going?” which aimed at recording the colorful moments the kids stayed with their dads turned out to be merely a commercial trick-the kids act with the press of earning money. And similarly, the program providers have to advertise a lot of ads to improve their profits. Consequently, the audience are tired with so many advertisement.
Conversely, the book is like the harbor where people could rest their hearts. The reading material not only widens people’s eyes and outlooks, but also help cultivate people’s interest and morality. When I was young, my parents introduced me to read a lot books I liked, like Huckleberry Finn’s Adventure and Harry Potter series. Furthermore, I read books like the Catcher in the Rye and the Man Chasing the Kate and American history. They all lured me to the sea of knowledge and leisure. I learned something that teachers never taught at class such as “Honest is the best policy” and “A friend in need is a friend indeed” as well as “The failure is the mother of success”
To be honest, watching television is not completely bad thing. Chances are that a good disciplined person will gain all his need to succeed. Like Bear’s Man vs Wild teaching you incredibly how to survive in the wild. And some documentary programs inform you about history you never know. So the device itself is just the platform where all kinds of content could appear on it and so do the books. Fortunately, old predecessors already left great treasure to us to read.
To put all in a nutshell, I prefer reading books to watching television. Since the televsion programs usually contains useless information and advertisement. Good books provide wonderful insight into the realm of knowledge. So I love reading books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28222222222 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97698248086 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.4163924545 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4230769231 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80769230769 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151274651701 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385887654366 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060993787342 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883906573638 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370693079798 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.