World today is filled with technological advancements. With these advancements, radical changes are taking place in various field.. The reading habits and sources of people are also changing with technologies. Digitalized world has changed several aspects of reading. Poeple now, prefer to read in their electronic sources than books. So, I feel like watching electronic devieces are better than reading books. I feel this way for several reasons which I will be proving below.
First, electronic devices has made our reading habit efficient and easier. We can store a lot of books and pdfs into electronic devices and start reading without any hardship wherever we want. For example, if a person has to write thesis based on several journal papers, he would have to carry all those journal paper with him wherever he wanders. Can you imagine how much tiresome would it be to carry those many papers along with you? Not only this, you might even have fear of losing those valuable documents if you are carrying. But, to make our life easier, if you stick with electronic devices and put pdfs of those journals into your phones, tablets or even laptops, it would be more convenient. You would have very less fear losing those papers and more easy to handle and care those papers.
Secondly, reading paper provides you with single way of acquiring information. You can only read and read and read. If you are unfamiliar with certain convoluted concept, you have no other option to understand but to read again. On the contrary, electronic device provides with various options. You may watch viodeos about certain topic and if you can't crack ideas, you may read or even listen to certain lectures. For instance, in mobile phones you have previlage of reading some texts. If you are unclear, you have previlage of watching some videos along with audio. As we know, it would be easier to grap information by watching and listening to our barin than reading, electronic devices might turn effective.
Last but not the least, can you imagie carrying tens of books every day to your college or school? Quite miserable right? Our life would be same if we had no any electronic devices. For instance, if I had class of quantam physics, chemistry and mocrobiology in my campus on a particular day, I would have to carry all those bulky books . But, luckly electrical devices has made my life easier. I can download those books and store them in those devices which avoids the requirement to carry bulky books. I can simply download some videos and watch to clear concept instead od searching specified topics and having a go at tiresome articles and theories. Thus, electrical devices has made our life easeir.
Therefore, electrical devices can be considered superior to books. With electrical devices, we would have efficient learning, easily available materials and ease in every day school tasks. It provides us with various options of learning. I can have video conference with some professor or watch some clips in internet to quelch my thirst of knowledge.But, with books it would be quite tiresome as I would only have option to read. There would not be dynamicism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...hanges are taking place in various field.. The reading habits and sources of peopl...
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Message: Did you mean 'this journal' or 'those journals'?
Suggestion: this journal; those journals
...rnal papers, he would have to carry all those journal paper with him wherever he wanders. Can...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... viodeos about certain topic and if you cant crack ideas, you may read or even liste...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...right? Our life would be same if we had no any electronic devices. For instance, i...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ould have to carry all those bulky books . But, luckly electrical devices has made...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...ng, easily available materials and ease in every day school tasks. It provides us with vario...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ternet to quelch my thirst of knowledge.But, with books it would be quite tiresome ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93996247655 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54223053185 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482176360225 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5993264245 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2285714286 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2285714286 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51428571429 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235935532754 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676342196042 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764819720529 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133954780283 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590840317536 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.