Rules are very important to regulate and manage our life in all aspects. Whether, these rules are strict or not, this can be weighed in many aspects. In my perspective. I do not concur that these rules that people should follow are too hard. In the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, rules are paramount factor that help to arrange our life. without rules life will be messy. Therefore our achievement will affect. This is example from my real live, my son follow my instructions, he study in time and do all his assignment perfectly. As a result, he can get a good score and attend a college. In the other hand, my nephew did not obey his parents rule. He did not pay attention to his study. Furthermore, he did not follow his school rules. He always return back home late and also attend his class. Therefore, he failed because, he did not obey his parents and school rules.
In addition, following rules will improve our life and prevent doing mistake. In all parts of our life we need rules to help us doing perfect achievement. In the other hand, if there is no specific laws or rules, every one will do what he want, hence, this will has a negative effect on result. For example, when there is no rule to restrict driving cars to eighteen years old person, any one with any age can ride car, and many accident will occur. In addition, rules which regulate roads like speed limits and roads signs. All these ways to manage our world and lead to comfortable life. Inconclusion, we can see the importance of obey laws to organize our life.
To sum up, I strongly do not agree with the previous statement. I think, the rules which are follow are not strict, as opposite, its suitible to organize our life and to get a perfect achievement.
Rules are very important to regulate and manage our life in all aspects. Whether, these rules are strict or not, this can be weighed in many aspects. In my perspective. I do not concur that these rules that people should follow are too hard. In the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, rules are paramount factor that help to arrange our life. without rules life will be messy. Therefore our achievement will affect. This is example from my real live, my son follow my instructions, he study in time and do all his assignment perfectly. As a result, he can get a good score and attend a college. In the other hand, my nephew did not obey his parents rule. He did not pay attention to his study. Furthermore, he did not follow his school rules. He always return back home late and also attend his class. Therefore, he failed because, he did not obey his parents and school rules.
In addition, following rules will improve our life and prevent doing mistake. In all parts of our life we need rules to help us doing perfect achievement. In the other hand, if there is no specific laws or rules, every one will do what he want, hence, this will has a negative effect on result. For example, when there is no rule to restrict driving cars to eighteen years old person, any one with any age can ride car, and many accident will occur. In addition, rules which regulate roads like speed limits and roads signs. All these ways to manage our world and lead to comfortable life. Inconclusion, we can see the importance of obey laws to organize our life.
To sum up, I strongly do not agree with the previous statement. I think, the rules which are follow are not strict, as opposite, its suitable to organize our life and to get a perfect achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50602409639 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42536285152 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521084337349 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8424003978 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460200395148 0.236089414692 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140756786277 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134549737105 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321538198725 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201220641829 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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