The rules that the societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict
Rules have tremendous and significant impact in on one’s life as they not only help the individual lead a obedient and systematic life but also improve their way of doing things. A punctual, polite and a well organized quality of an individual makes him stand unique as a quintessential individual. Some may support the fact that rules are unneceesary burden for young people as many rules are imposed on them by the elders.
First and foremost, rules are the most essential aspect in a school or university to maintain the standard of the institution as well as the student. Without a strict rule to attend the school or university, students do not remain punctual and come vaguely to their classes. For example, I was teaching undergraduate dental students in a private institute. The institution has kept strict rules to monitor the students by maintaining their biometric attendance whenever the student enters and leaves the classroom. This avoided proxy attendance and encouraged more students to attend the class. However , has it not been imposed, most of the students would not have even procured the required minimum attendance to appear for the exam.
Moreover, with the growing technology, we could see most of the young people even the school students have easy access to the mobile phones. They are easily lured to the mobile phones and internet. They spend endless hours relentlessly in front of the screens .Parents should strictly restrict the screen time, otherwise they will waste their productive time and energy playing in mobile phones or by browsing social media pages. Nowadays, the younger generation doesn’t listen to their parents and get swayed by multitude of things. The time and energy wasted in this indeed will reflect later on in their grades at the school or the university.
However, the rules should be sensible and meaningful. Anything which barged into them unnecessarily will have a negative impact. Admittedly , smooth conversation to correct their behaviour most often solves the problem than the strict rules. In many families, strict rules imposed by the elder people had created lot of mental stress and taken away all the freedom of the younger generation. This in turn affect the mental health of the individual which impacts the society later on.
In conclusion, due to the above mentioned facts, I reckon the fact that Rules are absolutely necessary in the present scenario to create or sculpt a punctual, obedient and successful individual. As I read somewhere, “ Follow the rules or follow the fools”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17464114833 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74090849265 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4319156201 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177508608931 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500750886059 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546292722007 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994661180463 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342724311493 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.