It is ubiquitous that mankind tend to attract towards optimism and happiness;no human in the world like gloomy, depressed and upsetting surroundings. In my opinion sense of humor is the most important charismatic trait that human being should posses for the few reasons:
To begin with, we are indeed social animals from the very early civilization that is linked with other people for happiness.Psychologically it is said that worst punishment for man is to lock him up all alone and given no opportunity to talk. Because no privilege to interact with others might produce deleterious effects such as depression, mental disorders, and other psychological disorders. In contrast, ability to make others laugh is positive trait that is remedy for almost all type of mental disorders. Everyone face challenges and problems in different stages of life to overcome that camaraderie created by playful people is imperative. For instance,many doctors believe to counsel mentally unstable person with funny words, comedy phrases and jokes. In contrast, very few people would like to be around rude, serious and stringent people.
The other reason that deserves attention sense of humor enhance cognitive and intellectual abilities, it is well known fact stress free environment aid to develop good mental health. Many schools follow the trend of arranging comedy dramas, speech and narration of funny jokes to help tender
brain to grow as part of extracurricular. Results shows that via this setting students are able to excel in the academic field as well as extracurricular activities. Even when someone see any educational video on you tube funny commercials displayed in between to create jovial effect on observers. In addition, around the globe many people choose to be comedians to trigger laughter among audiences and make their living. They are respected in the society due to their keen ability to pick up things and demonstrate to people in creative optimistic way.
To sum up, sense of humor is important ingredient to sustain happiness, progress intellectually and to be refrained from mental disorders and depression. In every spheres of life sense of humor is crucial for perseverance daily activities of life.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Psychologically
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Suggestion: , many
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to tender' or 'tender'.
Suggestion: to tender; tender
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Even when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as well as extracurricular activities. Even when someone see any educational video on yo...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
...urricular activities. Even when someone see any educational video on you tube funny...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33522727273 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06708734688 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622159090909 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.045450977 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138992977868 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378623418569 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475880719853 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859694161675 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061174083354 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.