should children be required to spend sometimes in doing household chores
As is acknowledged, child education lays the bedrock of the fundamental value of a person and poses far-reaching influence on a child's future growth. however, when it comes to the discussion on whether children should be required to do household chores, different people hold different opinions. As for me, I advocated that children should not be required to spend time doing household chores in terms of precious childhood time.
Firstly, children should spare no efforts to improve their academic performance. Nowadays, the competition in the job market has reached an unprecedented level, which leads to fierce peer competition. thus, children need to lay a solid foundation of knowledge and broadern their horizons in the limited school age. The only way for a child to get easy access to academic success is to devote themselves to study. however, if children are required to spend time doing household chores, their study plan will be disordered and they may not be able to finish all their assignments in time. Even though those household chores could be arranged at their leisure time, it may occupy their leisure time which could be used to do physical exercise and traveling. At the end, they may be stressed out under the overbearing academic pressure and physical pressure. Therefore, asking children to do household chores will increase the risk of academic failure and pose a negative influence on their future.
Secondly, doing household chores may do harm to children's health. Due to the limited experience and capabilities, children are unable to handle tricky situations, especially when their parents are away from them. thus, they are more likely to hurt themselves when they're trying to do household chores. For example, when children are washing dishes, children may find it difficult to hold the greasy and slippery dishes. thus, the dishes may send the dishes crashing to the floor and hurt themselves because of the broken glasses. What's worse, when children are sweeping the window, they may fall down to the floor. There's full of potentially dangerous and children may easily get hurt when their parents fail to keep an eye on them. thus, it is not advisable for adults to aks their children to do housework.
Admittedly, doing household chores could bring a lot of benefits to children. it could help children accumulate life experience and prepare them for future life. What's more, it could allow children to face the hardship. however, the benefits of excellent academic performance and healthy childhood outwight anything else. To cap, it is advisable and reasonable not to ask children to do household chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71982585419 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5468952073 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417894934822 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129297548398 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128988884089 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287261648889 0.150856017488 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928047055747 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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