Should children spend most of the time playing and studying or they should be required to
help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning.
The way of education is very important for kids, because it shapes the children’s abilities and attitudes. In my opinion, children should help the family with household chores.
To begin with, it is the time for children to establish fundamental skills. Children usually need to focus on few and easy tasks with low stress. To nurture some basic skills in their life, they can take care of them or others easily. For example, my elder brother, who studied abroad, had to deal with all household chores by his own. Owing to he often helped parents to cook the meals, he knows how to choose the ingredients and then make delicious food. When he studied abroad, he didn’t face many challenges to live independently especially cooking for himself and his roommates. By doing so, he also reduced outcomes and enjoyed much more healthy food. So, helping the family with household chores not only increase the families’ burden, but kids can attain more required abilities.
What’s more, most positive habits are cultivated in childhood. According to the researches, the best time for learning is before entering the elementary school, because their brain is growing. If the educators use accurate attitude to teach them, they would learn it in a very fast pace and take it as granted. For example, cleaning, as the prompt mentioned, is a pivotal concept for maintaining the environment. The cleaner surroundings we have, the healthier body we can possess. To be specific, if the kids get used to keeping the sanitation, like cleaning their house regularly. it would reduce the probability of bugs growth and disease spread. In the meantime, it also brings better playing and studying environment. Thus, by helping the family with household chores can children have positive habits naturally.
Certainly, some opponents might consider that children should focus on studying and enjoying their life. Great score may bring better career. Playing can relax them. However, in modern society, some kids addict to PC games that might be time-consuming behaviors. In addition, the most important thing is exploring their interests, not pursuing the high score. In summary, due to basic skills and positive habits, the children should spend much to help the family with household chores
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, in summary, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22162162162 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73392238897 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0572557461 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.28 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329200134543 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778444087031 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815570846357 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200340456987 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435067175102 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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