Transportation is important in our day to day life. As we are traveling from one place to other, daily for some reasons. For traveling, roads and highways are required. You cannot drive your car in the jungle. some people believe that goverment should spend money to improve public transportation, Others disagree. In my view, the Government should spend money to improve
road and highways for two important reasons.
First, Good roads are ensured less number of accidents. Life of a person is more important than traveling cost, i.e. public transportation cost less but driving vehicle, good roads are required. For example, when I was 13 I went to Junagadh by car. There were roads in our route that are not completely developed. I saw one car with very high speed traveling on that road.
Suddenly there was one hole in road and car driver did not recognize it. Their car meet an accident with the truck ahead of their car. They all died in that accident. If that road was developed or improved than the accident would not happen actually. Thus, It is clear from the above fable that damaged road can cost human life and the government should be focusing on how to improve that damaged roads.
Second, Improving or making new roads will create job opportunities for other people. For construction and Improvement, one may need contractors, engineers and laborers. This will creat job opportunities for them. For instance, There is a street near my friend house, the main street. The roads in that busiest street need to be improved. So for construction of new road, they require workers. They gave an advertisement in the paper for workers. The number of people had applied and some got the job. Constructing new road help workers to earn money. This is how the biggest problem of unemployment can be solved using road construction.
In sum, Good roads will reduce the accidents as well as improving the roads can create job opportunities for unemployed persons. For any transportation, roads are required and their condition should be good. If there is no road than driving the vehicle make no sense. That is why the government should spend money to improve the condition of roads rather than on public transportation
like buses and trains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ou cannot drive your car in the jungle. some people believe that goverment should sp...
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Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...red and their condition should be good. If there is no road than driving the vehic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75208584192 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509186351706 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9620018015 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273246963588 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714765220724 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104986882941 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135343914179 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995272364175 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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