Should money be spent on space exploration? To what extend do you agree?
Human-being has desired to conquest skies and today thanks to technological developments, go further from this aim and approaches to conquering of galaxies. Faced this controversial subject, quite a few would claim There are more urgent needs to be addressed on earth, in contrast, others believe this expenditure leads to various benefits for all human race. I personally support the idea of spending money in space exploration. The bases of my reasons are overall and future related.
According to overall view, many of technologies that we utilise in everyday life are conferred from space researches. For example, take satellite technology that we use it to communicate with each other and locate the exact locations on the earth, or meteorological satiates that help scientists to predict hazardous weather condition and help people to prepare for storm. Another example, microchips and most effective computers were developed to get rockets and people into space. Besides, in the space the total condition and immune system of body becomes weaken and vulnerable. For example, lack of protection for abundant radiation that leads to cancer, lack of gravity that weaken bones. Therefore most of these researches have done to find solutions for improving these situations and indirectly benefit all humans.
In consistent with future related aspect, natural resources of earth like fuel resources are about depletion and in parallel with this difficulty overpopulation is another problem. Human being in some parts of this planet suffers starvation and lack of clean water. Provision of enough arable lands and sufficient food that can feed everyone will become more rigorous trouble in the future. These problems can lead human race to a tragic end. Governments assign a lot of worthy resources and billions to help scientist do useful researches and explore alien planets for new resources because they will bring more advantages in long term programs. Thus, space exploration for new sources on alien planets can be observed as salvage from tough future and fix over-population problem.
In conclusion, some people believe governments should allocate the space exploration's budget to crucial needs on earth, but others claim these expenditures will prepare several benefits in long term and will fix troubles like overpopulation and resource shortages. I strongly support the later idea because of overall and future related argues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29854368932 0.229887763892 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.143203883495 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123786407767 0.0866891130778 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0218446601942 0.046263068375 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0169902912621 0.0685040099705 25% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.131067961165 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0339805825243 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85570050526 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364077669903 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0679611650485 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218446601942 0.0209618222197 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00485436893204 0.0139019557991 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2442.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44327176781 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424802110818 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337730870712 0.251872472559 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229551451187 0.174417080927 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163588390501 0.112833075102 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85570050526 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588390501319 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 69.3983486199 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0555555556 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8333083758 48.84282405 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 54.8286426268 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 2.54666666667 1.45489161554 175% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13822279918 0.300154397459 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0842278593573 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0418027747379 0.0752933317313 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473904357207 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139719042342 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546803699384 0.114077575197 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465880397646 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.336256959116 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0111883087946 0.067059652881 17% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100783186863 0.210909579961 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321683621049 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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