Should the students do part-time job?

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 43.0788530466 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 52.1666666667 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 41.0 1977.66487455 2% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 7.0 407.700716846 2% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.6265765617 4.48103885553 36% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.12852348939 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 7.0 212.727598566 3% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.524837075471 191% => OK
syllable_count: 9.9 618.680645161 2% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 7.0 20.1344086022 35% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.0 100.406767564 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 7.0 20.6045352989 34% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.45110844103 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184431916623 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184431916623 0.076458572812 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184431916623 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.29 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.1575268817 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.01 8.01818996416 162% => OK
difficult_words: 4.0 86.8835125448 5% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.5 10.002688172 25% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.8 10.0537634409 48% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.