Should young people be given strict rules to be followed in a society? Do you agree or disagree on this. Support with relevant examples and reasons.
The young generation is the future of any nation. The way in which youth progresses is one of the major factor in determining the development of a nation. Thus the younger generation needs to be responsible, more focused. To achieve this purpose, it is essential that some rules are imposed on them.
Essentially these rules are required so that it makes the youth more disciplined, which in turn changes their approach towards anything they do or perform. Having disciplined approach towards life will make them respect and value time. This way they won’t procrastinate things which need their attention. Also disciplining life will teach them prioritizing, which is learnt by having a focus driven mind and channelizing thoughts in right direction.
Secondly, imposing these rules is impertinent because the youth of this generation are born in a risky age. This is the age when most of the young generation lose their track, forget all their responsibilities and indulge themselves into activities which are outright abuse of the freedom bestowed upon them. They lose their focus and all their actions have negative repercussions on the society. Thus it is important that they follow some ground rules and their parents as well as their teachers make sure that they are following these rule. Following these rules will make them more organized. It prevents things from going haywire and prevents chaos in society. This establishes a society which is peaceful and fair.
Thus, in conclusion imposing rules on the youth is important. Albeit, there would be some resistance it is not completely impossible, if the measures are taken prudently. Although penalising can be used as an option to discipline the youth, it is not viable always. More than penalty the youth needs to be reformed. Reformation provides a better approach than having penal provisions for the same. Psychological support can also be an effective solution to the same.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217142857143 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.197142857143 0.158761421928 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828571428571 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457142857143 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0714285714286 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0942857142857 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0628571428571 0.0351676179071 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83706525822 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142857142857 0.0309702414327 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114285714286 0.0887237588012 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171428571429 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1958.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 315.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21587301587 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330158730159 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27619047619 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212698412698 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136507936508 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83706525822 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 56.4809655857 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0300773606 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2380952381 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 42.619047619 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.19090909091 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169980451514 0.300154397459 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131874443853 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944818943508 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463214089871 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120110231748 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679378699212 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036174481148 0.0781384742642 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234586671386 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0683980783306 0.067059652881 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11452116837 0.210909579961 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189726837266 0.0618886996521 31% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.