As far as I concern, People have been debating the pros and cons of the statement that teenagers can work while studying. A job plays an important role in everyone's life. Work will get an opportunity to balance personal and professional life. From My personal view point, I strongly agree with the youngster should work while studying together for the following two rationales.
First of all, Working with continuing education provides student an opportunity to earn money which helps them to provide some financial support. Students in the college need some financial support to pay the bills and other expenses. Take my personal example to illustrate this, I still remember the days when I came to the united states first time as an International student. As I am coming from Middle class family, My parents did not have enough money for my college. So, I had to take financial loan to complete my graduation and I also had decided to work part time while studying. That helped me for my bills, apartment rent and other expenses. Any kind of financial aid will help student to become more independent.
The another reason is that work with education will teach you about time management. Student have to manage time for the education as well as job. To illustrate this, I will take my personal example. I had applied in the pharmacy school few years ago. At the same time, I decided to get some clinical experience as well which helped me with my work. I had to take some classes and worked as a pharmacy technician at the same time. So, time was crucial for me because I had to complete some home work and had to do some house hold chores right after the school. Some days were really exhausted, But after the Graduation from pharmacy school, I was almost ready to take all responsibilities with time management skills.
Some people conflicts the idea of teenager's work during school. Some people strongly believe that during the school, young students should concentrate on the study rather than diverting mind towards job. This Idea has it's own advantages. According to a survey released by the federal research center, More than two thirds of people agreed to work while studying.
All in all, Work while studying needs to be considered positively in terms of promoting not only opportunity to make money, but also means to learn time management and socialization skills. In general, I wholeheartedly believe that the very first thing we should do now is to admit the importance of financial support during education as the key to open the door of our bleak future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...aduation and I also had decided to work part time while studying. That helped me for my b...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e idea of teenagers work during school. Some people strongly believe that during the...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to time'
Suggestion: to time
... to make money, but also means to learn time management and socialization skills. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, third, well, while, in general, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85067873303 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6568600693 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3419150477 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.76 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.68 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139507953568 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457538084286 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338214734283 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081891788606 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024169903511 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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