Some high school students are delaying college for a year in order to take a gap year where pursue other opportunities such as work or travel. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of gap years. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
First and foremost, the advantages of the high school students who took a gap year are, personally they got the opportunity to live a stress free and an informal life after all those 12 years of school. Personally, this would give them a chance to refresh their minds. Academically, the students who choose to pursue work will get a hands on experience and training. Additionally, this experience will help them in the future to compare the opinions and decisions. They also use the gap year to explore places in the world.The students who relied on their parents will start to live their lives individually.
Although, there are advantages of students who spends a gap year also has some disadvantages. The time limit they took was long and this leads them to forget the academic rules and regulations that was the school provided. Furthermore, the students also could lose their strength and bond to their education. The attractive and the appealing world pulls them to the wrong tracks like spending time with friends, enjoying life without responsibility. After a year of work experience, they could think of job to earn more instead of pursuing their college education.
To sum it up, Time is precious. Choosing and pursuing the right path makes it worth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99056603774 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77376138573 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0980599221 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210316489771 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731116237521 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836431071946 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123071241561 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070240749726 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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