Some parents forbid young children from owning smartphones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
Smartphones have become a basic need after food, clothing and shelter. Although, the current generation is more into the phones and the smart world rather than in real world. In my opinion, cell-phones are very important today for safe survival.
Smartphones have various factors. Initially, parents can stay in touch with the students. Even if they lose contact, with the help of latest technology available, they can track the phones of their kids via GPS. Students travel to nearby cities to attend schools and colleges. There has to be safety measure. Also, they need basic resources handy, that does not waste their time. For example, they travel daily, so they need buses and train time tables or to book cabs or just simple GPS-to drive safely.
The second reason being, They can look up their doubts anytime anywhere. Students can go through their online class, or some study material while being in the lecture. Professors, now-a days, send all the assignments online on the student portal or via email. Thus, is is important that that student is able to access the assignment and other study materials. When in doubt, one can always Google.
The most important point is every student has his/her own social life. They have friends, best friends, guides etc. they need to keep in touch with anyone, talk to them and it is very important to have a social life. One cannot be alone. The phone is the best way to do that. Instant messaging has made the world shrink in size as well.
Every coin has two sides. It is important for the student to keep smart phones for the development of his/her personality and their individual safety. Although, parents supervision is required in early teenage. One can not completely forbid smartphones in this new world, but one can always teach the right way to use the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ven if they lose contact, with the help of latest technology available, they can track th...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... the student portal or via email. Thus, is is important that that student is able to ...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ersonality and their individual safety. Although, parents supervision is required in ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3746344748 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.036229491 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.96 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.48 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214778984418 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522928760523 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473498468891 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113331806937 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267429768779 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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