Mena nd women are physically different
There have been a debate on the qualities and equalities between men and women over ages. There are fancy terms that came in picture over the years like Feminism. Also, when it comes to physical differences between men and women, there have been arguments as who is stronger and who is not. Although, there are differences between men and women in any way, however, I do not agree to the claim that men and women are not equally suited for any task.
Women,couple of decades ago were responsible to stay at home, take care of family and wait for the husband to return from war front. The scenario was very different. There was no awareness and there was always someone to take care of heavy physical activities that came on a women's way. Also, men were far away in some kind of heavy physical activity. Men and women, then, were not same or equal. But today, the concept has changed. There is no task that both are not able to do on their own. Men drive, women drive. Men can run and women can also run, even in heels.
The other day I was travelling from San diego to Pittsburgh when I saw that the person who was loading bags in the plane was a woman. The physical strength of a woman is no different from that of men. It is just that, previously, they stayed at home and hence there no record for their physical activity. They are feciously strong. Their strength increases after they give birth too. On the other hand, there are so many activities that women do and that the men can handle so well. Women were trained to do all the delicate work in earlier days. But now, best chefs, best fashion designers and best tatoo artists are men. This work is very intricate and requires calm hands. Men can do that.
The best boxer in the world and 7 times olympics champion is Mary Kom. I agree that there is a male boxer also, but then again, there is not much difference between the two. The physical strength of both men and women had differences because the differences were in the head of the analysers.
In all, the crux of the of the entire writing remains the same. Vehemently, men and women can perfom all tasks equally. They were just not given a chance earlier.The creaters of the universe have made them the same.
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Suggestion: , couple
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Suggestion: of the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce earlier.The creaters of the universe have made them the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45365853659 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24016125025 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485365853659 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5093443319 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9655172414 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1379310345 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51724137931 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234048044512 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650762737095 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788116581266 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151027652786 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686143668137 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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