Some people are always in hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at slower pace. Which do you prefer?
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have always been looking for peace and tranquility in order to lead a successful life. Arguably, they bend over backwards to reach their goals in different ways. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that in order to get things done we should accelerate in our works. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that people should take some time to conduct their work in reasonably. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that if people do their work in hurry, they may find themselves in trouble. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, people are more knowledgeable and they are informed of the consequences of wrong decision, which may accompany them in their whole life. Scientifically speaking, when people are in hurry they cannot make a sound decision due to the fact that something unexpected may come up in the spur of the moment. In fact, people need to analyze the positive and negative aspect of a decision because in hurry situations they may not behave meticulously. Delving further into the issue reveal that in order to make a precise decision people need to think wisely and if they do not take significant problems into consideration, something destructive may come up. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that vast majorities of people who were successful in their professional and personal life have took some time to carry out their works.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that take some time provide fertile ground for people to consult with other experienced people who are proficiency. Broadly speaking, people in hurry might run into a huge problem and overwhelmed by stress. In this case, they are not enable to get things done appropriately. To put it in other word, many people are not experienced and expert and they stuck when they hasten in their work. Actually, consults will provide an opportunity for people to make a right decision because of some useful advice given by consults. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, if people do their works quickly they provide with lots of free time and can conduct many activities. In addition, it will enhance productivity which patronize people with more chances to be successful. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, take some time or being in hurry in order to get thing done has its own benefits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that take some time will provide people with an opportunity to think meticulously and make a better decision. Additionally, in order to do works in a proper way people can take the advantage of experts that may come up with right advice. I highly suggest that people should not be in hurry due to the fact that they lose the chances of success in their everyday life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 959, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...eir professional and personal life have took some time to carry out their works. ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...o consult with other experienced people who are proficiency. Broadly speaking, people i...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...d by stress. In this case, they are not enable to get things done appropriately. To pu...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ion. Additionally, in order to do works in a proper way people can take the advantage of expert...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220713073005 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.169779286927 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.081494057725 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.062818336163 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0594227504244 0.0685040099705 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0390492359932 0.0351676179071 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82169112847 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390492359932 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00848896434635 0.00188951952338 449% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730050933786 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0305602716469 0.0209618222197 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152801358234 0.0139019557991 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3222.0 2387.08602151 135% => OK
No of words: 538.0 408.028673835 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98884758364 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342007434944 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239776951673 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171003717472 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128252788104 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82169112847 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485130111524 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.7461959087 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4166666667 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7844660065 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.394361834 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.33139534884 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403139260444 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100671182808 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0756442124716 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488990872982 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130410640715 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162524347853 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695564464895 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.49907807727 0.336927656856 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.026333484602 0.067059652881 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321432597461 0.210909579961 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242583538654 0.0618886996521 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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