Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, life moves fast and many people try to correspond to its speed. They spend too much time running and doing their responsibilities, but they don’t understand the value of every second of our life. Life is very short and we need to live and enjoy every particle of it. I prefer to take time and live life at a slower pace.
First of all, slowing things benefits in organizing and pre-planning our works for the whole day, so we can avoid forgetting specific work which we have to do and mistakes. The fast life is all around us, for instance, fast food, fast cars, fast conversations, fast families, fast holidays, and so on. By doing all these things we feel that we have completed our work but there is no enjoyment in doing it. Moreover often people make mistakes by doing so fast.
In addition, because of too much competition around the world people always run to achieve their goals or run behind the money; which leads to less communication with their outside world. People should interact, communicate, and mingle with their families, friends and enjoy quality time with them. Some of them don’t even have time for their hobbies. Doing extra-activities, hobbies makes the mind calm and stress relief, more creative which is very much required in this fast pace of life.
Furthermore, life has become more stressful and constant challenges in every field. People don’t have time to look after their health. Moreover, life is tough and always full of surprises which we need to deal with every moment without taking break. So, people should slow down their fast life, take some time to do exercise, mediation, take care of their health, take a vacation and visit new places and many more. It really helps them to build positive energy, stay connected with people around them.
To conclude, life is uncertain and we need to enjoy every moment of it. There is no logic in running and getting things done in a hurry, from which we don't gain anything, instead we miss many things in life, which we should enjoy. Mistakes are done by doing things fast or sometimes forget. It’s always good to be organized, plan in advance, take small steps, do one thing at a time, instead, of doing multiple things. Health should be number one priority in everyone's life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...doing multiple things. Health should be number one priority in everyones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, for instance, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80253164557 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48661985852 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521518987342 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6765656561 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2272727273 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288399647441 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977352760813 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873074693799 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174909490243 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549748031266 0.0645574589148 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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