some people like to be the leader of a group. others like to be a member of a group in which another person is the leader. which do you prefer? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A group work is contributing of different members with different talents and skills for getting to a purpose. All these groups need a leader for lead the group in right way. Also the members should listen to leader and do their best. In my opinion being leader is so difficult and if I have the power of choosing, I won’t choose to be a leader. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.
First, an important reason is that a leader should have self-confidence. This is the most feature of a good leader but I don’t have enough self-confidence and even speaking in front of people is so hard and stressful for me. In my third level of high school I had to be the leader of a group for mathematic problems and I couldn’t speak with them really good and our members of group didn’t reach to the goal that they wanted and unfortunately that was my mistake.
A further point we must consider is that a leader’s duty is specifying other’s duty based on their talents and skills and after that managing and controlling them. The leader should pay attention to other’s works and if the members don’t do their duties, leader should announce them and another weak point is that I can’t say any body that you aren’t doing well and punish them. I think they will be angry of me and know me as an enemy. I want to be friend with everybody. For example in high school I was leader of class for one week and I couldn’t tell my friends anything because they just made fun and didn’t pay attention to me. A wonderful leader should have authority and be serious but I don’t have any of these personalities.
Apart from the points I made above, responsibility is the most important features that a leader should have and fortunately I have this feature. However, there are a lot of negative points that I have but I am a really responsible person and I try with all of my body to do what I should do. Furthermore, if I was a group’s member I am responsible too and I exactly do whatever the leader want from me and I usually help others to do their jobs. One time I was leader in university for preparation a ceremony and some of my members didn’t listen to me and do what I want from them so because the sense of responsibility I did they work and I got so tired that day.
To sum up, for the reasons were stated above I consider that I can’t be a good leader and I always prefer to be a member. Notwithstanding, I am so responsible but that isn’t enough and others aspects of personality I stated above are necessary. Finally, I will try to improve myself for being a leader because it will help me a lot in different levels of my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, third, well, apart from, for example, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52104208417 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92615777903 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414829659319 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.938664887 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7619047619 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270414604088 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102363870201 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532058385275 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186245006514 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546820519225 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.