Some people think that schools should offer only nutritious drinks such as white milk, water, and natural fruit juice. I agree with this policy because people can be allergic to some things. That is why I think that schools should offer only nutritious drinks for kids in school, So they won’t get sick from the things that the schools have. They should be able to drink whatever they want to drink at school, And they shouldn’t be told what they can or can’t drink in the schools. I think the principals should let us bring nutritious drinks to school. They should let us bring nutritious drinks in our lunches and in our lunches at school. Eating and drinking healthy makes you do better in school, Schools should offer only healthy drink options like water, juice, and milk because the soft drinks that many students might prefer are full of sugar and caffeine, there are many health benefits to drinking healthy beverages like milk and water, and many students do not have access or do not choose healthy drinks outside of school. Some people believe school cafeterias should stop selling soft drinks and other high-sugar drinks, while others think students should have a choice in what they drink.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: ankitapatel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12159261393 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7118691613 48.9658058833 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536883954896 0.236089414692 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265172316773 0.076458572812 347% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180218150542 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.536883954896 0.150856017488 356% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 86.8835125448 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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