Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
While many people think that it is good for students to have several short vacations and have very convincing reasons for what they think, I believe that having one long vacation is a better idea. In my opinion, each option has its advantages and disadvantages but I think the benefits of one long vacation outweigh the benefits of several short vacations. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, it will provide students with a great chance to have a part-time job. They can take various jobs and obtain some money. In my country, students a have three month vacation during summer and most of them use this time for doing useful activities. For example, when I was in high school, I took a part-time job in a computer center near my house. I taught younger children how to use computer and install programs on laptops. In my point of view, it was a good opportunity for me because I got valuable experiences. Besides, I obtained some money to purchase necessary things like cloths, books and so forth.
In the second place, students will attend classes and summer schools. They can learn new lessons, skills, etc. For instance, in my country, most secondary school students prefer to go to English language classes and improve their skills in speaking a foreign language. Furthermore, some students would like to participate in sport activities. For example, one of my friends was always going to a gym and he was enjoying swimming.
Last but not least, students can have nice trips during long vacations. They can travel to other continents like Europe and visit several countries. In my point of view, having several short vacations do not allow them to go to remote areas.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that having a long vacation is better than several short vacations based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88719512195 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63979851761 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7563476359 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3684210526 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27712448003 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775620461876 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779796551692 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16881270426 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695149172967 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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