Some people believe that busy parents should spend their time with children by playing games or sports and others believe that they should concentrate only child's study. Because a mass of people have a mass of opinion, but in my opinion, careful scrutiny reveals that parents must give time to their children for making fun instead of study. I think this way for several reasons and provide some reasons for my position.
Firstly, parents are the best teacher for a child. A child starts learning from their home first undoubtedly. Mental development is key importance for a healthy life and childhood is the best time for it. For example, when I was a child my parents gave me more time to play with them and my friends. Playing is not only a form of recreation but also helpful for social ethics, bonding and others. I could learn how to cooperate with others while playing as well as sharing my opinion with others. As a result, I easily become friends with an unknown person.
Secondly, parents are the best friends for their child too. If any parents always talk with their child their study, they will feel boring and become afraid when they will see their parents. Children will share everything with their parents just when they can turn into their friend. It is most important to build up a close relationship with the child which become so easy by playing them. A child always needs extra caring from their parents because they are unable to distinguish the good and bad things. Sometimes friends influence them to walk in the wrong path which is not expected for parents. Hence, friendly parents are more reliable to a child sharing everything to them all thing they face.
On the other hand, it must be true that extra caring or extra fun does not always bring a good result. Naturally, children become arrogant sometimes and do not study properly. At this time, parents must be careful about their study. Parents should concern about their study as their other things. Proper learning can make their future bright. There is no alternative of study to build up a successful career. At this point, parents can not guide their child for the study if they do not become a good friend of their kids. After all, for being a good human being not only study but also moral ethics, social behaviour is also important factors.
In a nutshell, there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that friendly behaviour is the first priority to make the right direction for a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, after all, for example, i think, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71689497717 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26107176548 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5551612874 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26923076923 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259420448914 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775168442673 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752797554697 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145529466128 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984117634335 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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