Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
In this fast-changing world, spending time with children has become next to impossible for some parents. The importance of this issue raises the question of how parents should spend time with their children and which approaches to have a more significant effect on children’s minds: playing games with children or doing a related activity to the schoolwork of children. When it comes to me, according to the reasons which are presented in the subsequent paragraph, I believe that playing games or sports with children is more beneficial for both parents and children.
Firstly, playing sports can improve the relationship between parents and their children since by doing these activities children can have fun and have a good memory from their childhood. Drawing from my own experience, my father was a construction worker and he had to work 14 hours a day. Thus, he hadn't enough time to spend with my siblings and me. I remember at the weekend he played cards with us and we had a lot of fun together. By playing with his children he tried to improve his relationship with them.
Secondly, playing games and having fun can have a positive influence on children's schoolwork. Since children spend a lot of their time at school and their minds are busy with academic subjects, having fun with family and playing games or sport will increase their efficiency with their studies. These activities draw children's attention away from study for a while and their minds will become more fresh for learning new lessons.
Lastly, I think the best use of parents' time is to have fun and playing sports with their children because it’s good for the health of the whole family. Nowadays, the sedentary lifestyle is more common among families also the wide use of the internet and technology threaten the health of children and families. Therefore, by playing sports, parents not only can build a stronger relationship with their children but they can improve the health condition of themselves and their children.
In conclusion, I believe that have fun with children is the best use of the limit time of the parents because they can have a healthier lifestyle, improve their relationship with their children, and increase the school efficiency of children. It is crucial that parents spend some quality time with their children because children need it very much.
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- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...he had to work 14 hours a day. Thus, he hadnt enough time to spend with my siblings a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04071246819 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67254320153 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445292620865 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.760949572 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8125 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461882314368 0.236089414692 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177608882414 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108895317922 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301565961859 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636152677201 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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